Poetry Prompts: The Color Red
I started a challenge with some of my friends to write poems based off of color prompts. We're starting with red, and the rule is the first and last line have be the same, or very similar, and address some characteristics the poet ascribes to red. I'll be uploading them here as we finish.
My mother's poem:
Red
Decadence of dying embers
Reflected in glittering crystal stems
Of champagne and chardonnay
Velvet dress and cummerbund
Fire sparkling on gilded dishes
Ruby flashes from fingers and earlobes;
Unfeeling, uncaring opulence-
Revolutionary anger
Rising against the Opressors-
Decadence dying in red embers-
Red
Jacob's Poem:
Red skinned was Esau, what color his twin?
Hand on his ankles, he envied the hue;
Grasping his brother, his goal but to win
Isaac's own blessing, the line tried and true;
greater than gold and worth more than red stew!
Green became Jacob, so covered in phlegm!
Envious, hairy, and hidden from view,
The hand of the father, to fate would extend,
and the red blood of Jacob would spill for all men.
Lopez's Poem:
Red makes no sound
Red makes no sound
in a crowded room
you’re the only voice I listen to
Red has no taste
Crimson lips
makes my favorite foods seem dull
Red has no hair
Burning locks
That singe my fingers
Scolds the night sky
And makes the sun sets jealous
Red has no sight
The slightest glance
makes my whole world crash around me
Apocalypse oh Apocalypse I welcome you
But i will not welcome this
Red has no face
So why do i see you in my dreams at night
See you dart past doorways
Hear your laughter in the kitchen
Your breaths in the bed room
Your hands in between mine
Your head resting on my shoulder
You see..
Ive figured out now that
Red has no eyes
No nose
No smile
No neck to kiss
No hands to hold
No more memories to create
But…
Red has no tubes
No doctor visits
No monitors
No cold steel
No incisions
No chemo
No scars…
no pain
No men in lab coats saying
“there nothing more we can do”
As I lay these flowers on the cold ground
And read this epitaph in stone
I gently place my ear to the dry soil
Its then I realize
Truly
In the silence of the night…
Red… makes no sound…
Dana's Poem:
Красный - значит гарный, ни иначе.
Злобно цветят яркие листвы,
Бурно тусят, как бабочки бродяче,
Остатки лета ветвою занести.
А пусть горят, пока дрыхнует свет,
И год, и томление собачье.
Гобеленом алым буран пол-одет -
Красный - значит гарный, ни иначе.
Red can be beautiful and no other
Terribly blooming clear leaves
Tempestuously billow, like wandering butterflies
Bringing in a bough the summer's remains.
And let them burn, while color sleeps,
And the year, and dogs lament.
The blizzards half dressed in a crimson tapestry -
Red can be beautiful and no other
My Poem:
(Pending)
RJ's Poem (which does not count because I know he can do better):
Red is such a beautiful color
I want to paint with the red on my hands
To carry it and put it in the sand
I held on too tight
I made mistakes in the night
Although the night is calm now
Everything I have is gone now
You will be missed but remember
Red is such a beautiful color
Skyler's Poem:
My grandma planted a young red maple,
It's changing leaves and autumn staple,
A crimson blaze amid the sepia scene,
A grand departure from the foliage green,
Planted the same year I was born,
Red, to face the cold, we both adorn,
For the tree it's leaves, for me a coat.
My grandpa would work in his shop,
Windsor chairs would cover the cabinet top,
Green, black, and blue milk paint flowed,
Though Red undercoat when worn had showed,
The Red shown wear, use, and care,
His wish for their love made to bare,
For the chairs it's paint, for me a coat.
My mother would crochet afghans of reds,
Blankets, throws, covered couches chairs and beds,
Stripes and blocks and chevrons of colorful thread,
Lengths and widths from hand to hand and foot to head,
Warm and thoughtful gifts for all,
Providing comfort in Winter and Fall,
For Blankets it's yarn, for me a coat.
I was given a hand-me-down bulky Red coat,
Some old promotional piece forgot in a back closet tote,
Buffalo Brand Seed Co. with a Bison in white on the back,
Worn and cracked, threadbare lined by a flour sack,
Given freely to keep me warm in the brisk cold air,
Unfashionable to many, a sign and gift of care,
For most it's love, for me a coat.
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I'm open to including random submissions as well- stay tuned for our exquisitely polished trash ❤
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